Great catch Jay,

I am absolutely delighted that you dissected this story and came out with a valuable input. I must admit it did not occur to me before you mentioned. However, as I rummaged through my archives last night, I discovered that I only tend to write 'flash fiction' - stories that are so concise, it does not have a defined begining or closure. It is just written with brevity, like a research paper, which, by all means does not entice readers.

So that means I have limitations, I do not have patience to write an epic. Heck, I doubt if I could even write an article few pages long. But partly it is because I just wanted to be on a safter side, I guess I'd want my posts to be rather humdrum than full of errors. Maybe I will edit one of the narrative I have written in the past about my visit to Nepal after a long time, but it has so much personal details, I'd rather not share it here in sajha.

Thanks once again.