Obviously I have become a fan of Karma Gurung productions. I like your camera angles, editing, sequence etc.
Now, for the criticism; it appears that you have progressed pretty well on videography, but now people will expect a solid content not just the way you shot it or other technicalities. I was very bored with the whole thing progressing so slowly. I know you want to take that extra closeup shot (b-roll) stuffs but that doesn’t mean it has to make it to the final cut. Progression was very slow on this one.
I think you have progressed well, it is now time to rise over the plateau and offer something interesting-not boring content.
I wanna see more from you hence the criticism.