Posted by: bodmas March 21, 2011
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language ta ramro cha, tara story ali cheu na tuppa ko bhayo. I think your story is trying to build something and before it is buiit it finishes. If you put more things before it ends.. . I mean story k ho? But you have the potential.
Just my 2 cents.
Just my 2 cents.