@ simple keta , there are different types of poems as far as i know. and as u explain and i went through ur poem i found u are more interested and talking about gajals not poems.
Poems are words of heart straight written in paper which may have rhythm or not !
ther is vast difference between MUna Madan(by laxmi prasad devkota) and Ghumne Mech Mathi andho manche (bhupi sherchan) , but both are nice and great creations !