Thank you all for taking out time and reading “the story”.

Baire, when you first said how twisted the story was..I kept answering in my mind to you saying it’s a web of human relationship. However, we all make it complicated.
 

Serial, Thank you very much. It means a lot for me when someone likes it . It gives enough inspiration to sit with pen and fiddle around with it. All of a sudden one feel good that the story was published . One more thing Yes! You are right Sara is blessed with her friendship.
 

Thuldai,
तारेमाम्
I am still a learner hope you will forgive me for the errors. I know its unforgivable when one decides to publish and if the story has flows. To have someone like you to read me is an honor in itself.

Ritthe,  you were right about if people would understand in one go of read.. Specially having so many characters, I am sorry it confuses the reader. Next time I will try to keep it simple and limited.

 

Perfectionist, When I penned this story I did not think of the ride but the simplicity of how life moves from one junction to another.   The frienships are always a key part.  You cannot choose some of the things in life but friends you choose in our conscious mind shall not be regretted in the days to come.

Thank god you have other 11 months to love and enjoy. Its only 30 days you will have to bare the dislike.

Also in a lighter note: Why November? Sautini aama ko chora/chori ho ra?

 

Bhakte dai,  
The character “SARA” as “ma” is very close to my heart. Thank you

 

Khaikkhaik,

How do I thank you enough? It’s Kind of you to take so much time to give a review. I am sorry I hate the word “criticism” itself. I am not even a writer and specially now I have read and re read the story several times after your comment I realized that the story for sure lacks the romance may be the other reason is when it comes to romance I am hopeless. I think one has to be in love to express it.. next time when I write something I try my level best not to disappoint if there is another story that is. 

Establishments of the characters are picked up from different walks of life. Are you trying to tell me that I have a story a hasty ending?  I am sorry if It feels like an abrupt ending. As far as your indulgence with the story is concern there is nothing more honoring about your research with cancer. Who knows she might just live her life until 103.. What say?

I hope all of your favorite writer will see your comment and come back for you. Wish you all the BesTs.

 

We should have thought the title as being “circle of life” I am trying to think if the title did the justice to the story . thank you for liking it.

-Singing off
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