Posted by: Hasaune Paree January 19, 2011
My best friend
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writing is smooth (but I feel, you could have extend little bit at last part which leads Navin to point a gun towards you)

I must appreciate your writing (you mention this is your 1st time), it has unique plot

Hope to read more in future...All the best
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