I have not read a single story posted in sajha from beginning to end before you made an entry. I had read your Preena's story, and this one; I started and didn't know when it finished. Loved it. I didn't find any unnecessary detail. The sentences were simple and went with a flow.

5 stars to both Preena's story and Suresh's story. Both shows real life.  

Thank you, come up with some more... waiting'