Oh, sure. But u already made changes to it :D
In fact, you have added one more para now.. ha ha...
Anyway, story is not new. This is a quite familiar one, could have been presented interestingly not like a plain rice.

But
now that it was finally over, she felt absolved. Today she felt like
the girl from her youth that used to tuck her dolls diligently in bed at
night. Pramila slowly patted her saree as she longingly looked at her
lap where her much awaited and desired doll would lie seven months from
now.

I forgot what was there in the conclusion before but now it has been messed up more. Sorry, I don't understand what do you mean by this para? Particularly, the last sentence. What do you mean by desired doll would lie seven months from now? Aah, you are confusing with your edits. Edit it but make it more readable.