Posted by: Vivant October 19, 2010
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"And she, she thought that she had been a pretty good person. And God had seemed to be punishing her for something.
And now it was finally over."
My primary school teacher, may her soul rest in peace, would probably have shrieked in horror at a sentence beginning with a conjunction. But, times, they sure have changed (sorry madam) ;)
Nice story. Keep it up and hope you write more.
And now it was finally over."
My primary school teacher, may her soul rest in peace, would probably have shrieked in horror at a sentence beginning with a conjunction. But, times, they sure have changed (sorry madam) ;)
Nice story. Keep it up and hope you write more.