I think uranus ans sanee trying to give constructive criticism but I don't agree with their points.
First off, a little bit of cheesyness is warranted by the story. Homeyji's defense on Roshan's story is a clever (rahter sleek and cunning?) Move but is fully justified. Reminds me of the latest controversy with Vince Vaugn saying electric cars r gay in a movie and ppl (A Cooper) calling him homophob. Vince part scripted him to say that and that doesn't make the writer a homophobe.
Now as for cheating, this is a story, an art work. The writer has full right to term things as he sees it. While I think some level of cheating is involved, it still is not a full cheating; but the writer can call it what he wants and we can certainly debate it over.

Good story...not bad at all.