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Hi
khalisisi


Thanks for the words.

You wrote, "A poem cannnot and should not be judged, unless it is at a poetry contest (such a contest does not make sense nonetheless). "
I'll explain.

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Well... I wrote, "I like it, it is good. A little, small, something is missing. I hope, that you will figure it out pretty soon. Have fun. And, continue writing."

unknownanzel asked, "wht is missin ...why dun u let me know??? thanks for liking though..tc"
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grgDai questioned and suggested, "Simple keta what makes you so sure she's trying to write a poem?
Sometimes it's good to think outside the box. You need to be a little
more open minded."
 I answered/explained," Started from "had a dream" | finished in "i feel everything gonna be alrite someday...sometime.."

1. No, rhymes.
2. 7 sentences.
3. Complex "Past, Future, present".
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khalisisi, those were my answers. And, yes poesy shouldn't be judged. I was not judging but answering.

I hope I satisfied your quench.
:)

Have a wonderful time.
Bye.