Posted by: Mr. Hyde July 30, 2009
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I saw her today. she was with a ugly guy and holding hands with him.
oh my lord,he looked so obeying and I realized one more victim.
"A ugly guy"? It should rather be "an ugly guy". Do not corrupt the language for Christ's sake.
"Ugly guy" you better find him ugly instead of good-looking else you would appear bi-curious.
"He looked so obeying" or obedient? Does "female domination" appear in their menu tonight?
Crap!! I should have told that guy you are licking my left over.
I should have said, hey You are nothing ...Nothing but One more !!
"Left over"? As they say, monogamy is just the name of some kind of wood. It is more fun and adventurous to be a left over or make someone else a left-over because you will end up cherishing the good times that you had together after you have learned to move on. The essence of the last sentence is captured in this song:
She did not talk to me Nor she could see me straight
and That guy was following him like her Pet.
Nor see me straight? She thought you were gay or something? If not so, are you trying to say she
ignored your presence or she did not look straight into your eyes?
The guy was following him like her pet? How can the guy follow himself. When I read that I picture a dog chasing its own tail.
Following like a pet? In the initial stage of courtship, the man will even promise to fetch
Hercules' Golden Apples for the woman because picturing yourself hitting your first "home run" with her is so alluring.
Oh !! she became fat but she was looking good.
I felt bad and yea I missed her ...but that ruined my mood.
Some honesty at last (gushes out a sigh of relief). My advice to you is get over it for there could be some girl in store more suited for you. When you have done the job on at least five to ten partners jealousy will significantly fall to manageable levels. Moreover, jealousy is for someone who has failed and given up. Come on, you could be a winner.
I would not call this a poem. It is just a rant with much attempts expended on rhyming the corresponding end words in every pair of lines with very little regard for grammar and correct sentence composition. Also, a reader like me will not empathize with the emotions and ideas conveyed in it. But don't get discouraged by what I just wrote. Even Einstein is said to have failed the intermediate level
exam. Go figure.
oh my lord,he looked so obeying and I realized one more victim.
"A ugly guy"? It should rather be "an ugly guy". Do not corrupt the language for Christ's sake.
"Ugly guy" you better find him ugly instead of good-looking else you would appear bi-curious.
"He looked so obeying" or obedient? Does "female domination" appear in their menu tonight?
Crap!! I should have told that guy you are licking my left over.
I should have said, hey You are nothing ...Nothing but One more !!
"Left over"? As they say, monogamy is just the name of some kind of wood. It is more fun and adventurous to be a left over or make someone else a left-over because you will end up cherishing the good times that you had together after you have learned to move on. The essence of the last sentence is captured in this song:
She did not talk to me Nor she could see me straight
and That guy was following him like her Pet.
Nor see me straight? She thought you were gay or something? If not so, are you trying to say she
ignored your presence or she did not look straight into your eyes?
The guy was following him like her pet? How can the guy follow himself. When I read that I picture a dog chasing its own tail.
Following like a pet? In the initial stage of courtship, the man will even promise to fetch
Hercules' Golden Apples for the woman because picturing yourself hitting your first "home run" with her is so alluring.
Oh !! she became fat but she was looking good.
I felt bad and yea I missed her ...but that ruined my mood.
Some honesty at last (gushes out a sigh of relief). My advice to you is get over it for there could be some girl in store more suited for you. When you have done the job on at least five to ten partners jealousy will significantly fall to manageable levels. Moreover, jealousy is for someone who has failed and given up. Come on, you could be a winner.
I would not call this a poem. It is just a rant with much attempts expended on rhyming the corresponding end words in every pair of lines with very little regard for grammar and correct sentence composition. Also, a reader like me will not empathize with the emotions and ideas conveyed in it. But don't get discouraged by what I just wrote. Even Einstein is said to have failed the intermediate level
exam. Go figure.
Last edited: 30-Jul-09 08:15 AM