Thanks Guys,
perfectionist- I love that song too,, I got too many negative feedback for making my first one too long, so I tried to keep it short. And I am sure Sheetal is doing fine with Akash :D
dekchiedriver- heartbreaking indeed! I know, guys really are in control of women in that aspect. :P
sabaiko_satru- a kiss normally helps a relationship flouristh, but the last kiss ...:S
aastha and girly_girl: I know, sad eh? but Akash doesn't know about it, so i thinks its okay :D
jhan_besmari- it was short wasn't it? :P
8848m- You are thinking what I am thinking :D
dekchiedriver- i think they are doing something more fun than watching TV :P
gwarcha- The question is did Saumya really want to win the competion or did he just want the trophy?
nmsake- yup it was heatbreaking, thanks for your encouragemtent, I will keep writing :D

Thanks for your feedbacks again guys, this is really my second writing ever... so I need more feedbacks, negative ones are welcome too
People said my first one was too long, so i tried to make it short, I realize i could put more details in it, but well, its too late :D