"The coffee smell is acoustically  strong.."
What does aroma out of a beverage cup have anything to do with sound? How does the metaphor fit here? Could you please enlighten me on that?

"Rob just applied for his masters in Loyola Marymount University; secretly I wish he’d never get into the program,.."
Relationship hassles are aplenty when there is no commitment from either or both sides. Better accept the truth and be ready for it right from the start but enjoy the trip all along. Also, it sounds like you haven't got enough of him yet.

"The coffee has gone cold, and they are out of brown sugar~ atleast I think to myself~ menthol’s keeping me thinking, thanks to light marlboro lights as I read through~ Smoking is injurious to health."
Smoking is definitely not glam plus it tarnishes the oral pearls that you desperately need to reveal in smiles while charming a romantic or professional prospect.

Nevertheless, a good piece. See! you have some fans already.