Posted by: sigh January 28, 2009
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"10% Discount On Take Aways (Collection Only)"
Take Aways = Take Outs
Unles you say Take Aways in London? Hm...
What do you mean by (Collection Only)? Hm... Group Take Outs?
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Why do you have useful websites right at the beginning of the page on the home page? It looks very unprofessional, especially that you are trying to present and represent the restaurant via website. Does it have to be at that spot?
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Opening 7 days a week should be the LEAD. It should be at the spot where the useful websites and the google search is right now.
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Information on this website is just a general guide and are subject to change without notice
"Information on this website is just a general guide and are subject to change without notice" It comes out threatening, like a government disclaimer etc. People who will visit your friend's website are doing him a favour by visiting the site, so you should be encouraging them to visit it more often, and not chase them away. Maybe I read it a wrong way. But when I read it, I don't really want to waste my time to look at the site again, unles I have been to that restaurant several times and it's my fav. restaurant. Even then what the heck "change without notice,"
Maybe you could say the same message in a more genler way? "Please visit us regularly to check new additions in our menu and news," Hm...?
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Font size, chosen font and the spaces between the sentences need a major makeover. Make it look professional, since it's a business website. Is there a need to have a single space between the sentences? Right now to me it looks hodge podge and disorganized. I shouldn't be organizing the information to read it, the creator should organize it for his/her audience.
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And the advertisements should be at the bottom of the page maybe??? You are trying to advertise your friend's business first, not the neighbours'.
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Open 7 days a week should be on the top of the page after the delivery message, and then the contact information should be right there below it, and not on the side.
telephone
street address
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You can also include printable menus on the website.
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Always remember less is more. So, make it simple for your customers.
Visit other good renowned restaurants' websites to get an idea. See how they have presented their restaurant via web. You'll get an idea.
You need to work lot more on you site to make it look posh. And, also do spell check and grammar check as the site represents your friends' restaurant and technically his image as well. I'm sure he would like to be represented well.
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Good luck. For a starter, you are headed in a right direction.
Take Aways = Take Outs
Unles you say Take Aways in London? Hm...
What do you mean by (Collection Only)? Hm... Group Take Outs?
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Why do you have useful websites right at the beginning of the page on the home page? It looks very unprofessional, especially that you are trying to present and represent the restaurant via website. Does it have to be at that spot?
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Opening 7 days a week should be the LEAD. It should be at the spot where the useful websites and the google search is right now.
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Information on this website is just a general guide and are subject to change without notice
"Information on this website is just a general guide and are subject to change without notice" It comes out threatening, like a government disclaimer etc. People who will visit your friend's website are doing him a favour by visiting the site, so you should be encouraging them to visit it more often, and not chase them away. Maybe I read it a wrong way. But when I read it, I don't really want to waste my time to look at the site again, unles I have been to that restaurant several times and it's my fav. restaurant. Even then what the heck "change without notice,"
Maybe you could say the same message in a more genler way? "Please visit us regularly to check new additions in our menu and news," Hm...?
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Font size, chosen font and the spaces between the sentences need a major makeover. Make it look professional, since it's a business website. Is there a need to have a single space between the sentences? Right now to me it looks hodge podge and disorganized. I shouldn't be organizing the information to read it, the creator should organize it for his/her audience.
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And the advertisements should be at the bottom of the page maybe??? You are trying to advertise your friend's business first, not the neighbours'.
--------------------------------------------------------
Open 7 days a week should be on the top of the page after the delivery message, and then the contact information should be right there below it, and not on the side.
telephone
street address
------------------------------------------------------
You can also include printable menus on the website.
------------------------------------------------------
Always remember less is more. So, make it simple for your customers.
Visit other good renowned restaurants' websites to get an idea. See how they have presented their restaurant via web. You'll get an idea.
You need to work lot more on you site to make it look posh. And, also do spell check and grammar check as the site represents your friends' restaurant and technically his image as well. I'm sure he would like to be represented well.
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Good luck. For a starter, you are headed in a right direction.