Posted by: fortunefaded September 19, 2008
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'rhythm - Thank you very much bro.'
Rythm, seriously you have to stop writing like a man, or a 'bro' at least.
The confusion has happened far too many times to be left unsolved. My suggestion is to simply get a new name, more lady-like, if that makes any sense.
Regarding the topic at hand, noob_writer, this is a good attempt. I can empathize with your theme of an uncertain future towards the end of school life. It takes some courage to post something as a noob and I must encourage your attempts for future pieces. I can see from your writing you have given thought to it and good luck my friend.
Rythm, seriously you have to stop writing like a man, or a 'bro' at least.
The confusion has happened far too many times to be left unsolved. My suggestion is to simply get a new name, more lady-like, if that makes any sense.Regarding the topic at hand, noob_writer, this is a good attempt. I can empathize with your theme of an uncertain future towards the end of school life. It takes some courage to post something as a noob and I must encourage your attempts for future pieces. I can see from your writing you have given thought to it and good luck my friend.