Posted by: Samsara August 15, 2008
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An A for effort, but an F for presentation. Was a pain going through your whole piece of work. I just felt it just wasn't captivating at all, the grammar was really bad and most importantly, couldn't you have formatted your story a lil better so it would've been easier for us readers to go through with no probs and not be totally overwhelmed by the content that was all squished into a jar of molded cookies??
5 words to sum it all up as a reader: Please Spare Us The Pain!!