hahaha...la asti samma ta thikai thiyo...slow romance gai ra thyo amidst lil misunderstanding and incompatibility (which is understandable in a new relationship since no one's perfect :P)...tara last 2 bhaagma sab bhatabhunga!!!...kasto rish uthdo hola

yo bloodshed huna thalepachi ma ekdam squeamish huna thalchu tesmathi ekdum chhitto sab kura bhaye jasto lagyo ki is it just me? aba tyo raat niren frustrated bhayera ghar aaunu, sapana sanga ramro sanga naboli drinks garna thalnu, ani tehi time ma jiya le phone garnu (what great timing hahaha)..ani thak thuk parnu ..ani niren le jhappad hannu ,,ghar chhodnu ...ani sapana le suicide garnu...damn!!! quite an impulsive couple i must say or is it that the writer herself is impulsive? hahaha..:P yetti chhito sab kura ta movie lai fast forward gare matra huncha, hoina ra?..:P...

u r a good writer no doubt and you know how to narrate. in this, storyline ma full control nabhaye jasto lagyo (especially last ma) although u knew what to write ;P...u should have extended it by a couple of more parts and made the suicide look more realistic..by slowing things down...creating more tension in the atmosphere and  thereby forcing sapana to commit a suicide (like as if she had no other choice from her perspective)  to make it look more real ....but this is like pushing sapana to die coz the writer wanted to finish the story off in five parts :P...

that said, i totally understand that it's easier to comment than write a story. your giving time and energy to write it for us readers(which includes obnoxious ones like me :P)  is really very commendable (and sweet). keep it up. :D