Dipika ji,

Dhilai bhaye pani tapainko katha padhi bhyaye. It was pretty  good as usual. Kalpanik ghatana bhayeko karan ending chahi marmahik bhanda pani sukhat roop bata antya garda pathak haru lai haluko mahasus hunthyo hola. may be u wanted to reveal different thing that i mayn't know. i really appreciate the dialogues part. it was very perfect. dui patra bich sambat huda, sambat bahek pani tehako environment ko ajha badi barnan garna paye, sambat ma ajhai kautuhalta milna sakthyo ki. ani writings ma ajhai sahitik sabdha, byanga, example haru thapda kasto hola bhanera jigyasa rakchu. this story should give the sweet sandesh to all the readers and thanks for ur writngs once again.

Nepal Premi.