Sum_off,

I came to print out the whole story(esp. the part you added later) but couldn't stop myself laughing at your comment. So I decided writing something before reading the whole story which is of course a treat for the weekend.

Thank you so much for letting me know what you felt. Your honesty is something I always respect. I don't know what made you feel that I commented on your story without reading. I would say most probably becoz of my short comment. I apologize. Normally I don't write much but just let people know I read it.

Let me make myself more clear why I enjoyed every line. I was mesmerized by the way you have described Sandip's effort to transform himself to a white, how he was losing his own identity in the transformation , his wannabe crusade, how he was baffled by the different versions of "space" and  enigma about the scar above his right eye, a trailer of club dancing: esthetic protray in those illustrations.

I also enjoyed thoroughly reading the way you presented decipheral envision of Catherine's psychological battle as well as drama in your lyric. You have modified the statement "a picture speaks hundred words" into "fifty words are enough to describe the picture" and I found it very impressive too :)

maile yeti dherai comment ta kasaiko story ma pani gareki chhaina.....hehehe...tyo belama teti nai padheki thie and tetinai enjoy gare...one more thing, if people don't read such a quality writing then that is their loss, and IMO comenting without reading is being sarcastic rather than being nice.....please sum_off ma sarcastic ta chhaina hai  ;-)