Posted by: thapap July 10, 2008
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for a moment I was like huh!!!!!! this is something i know (O: it seemed like what I have been acquainted of!!!!
but again then i realized i did not write it he he he (O:
"amber" flow of your story is simply awesome and i could relate to this in so many different ways .. i cannot explain myself....
never been so shocked and awed by a fictional story......
few potions of interest that keep revolving in my empty head:
1. from scene VI "Every morning, he would wake up, light his Marlboro light and water the cactus." water the cactus. very interesting. lot of nostalgic effervescences.
2. from scece VII this one is simply the best "I'm coming to collect my lost soul. Pick me up at the airport. Find my itinerary attached with this mail…." (O: simply the best insight to the taal called "RARA" or is it the "NOODLE" he he he (O:
3. scene III is where i can find a lot of connections .
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keep writing amber
(O:
for a moment I was like huh!!!!!! this is something i know (O: it seemed like what I have been acquainted of!!!!
but again then i realized i did not write it he he he (O:
"amber" flow of your story is simply awesome and i could relate to this in so many different ways .. i cannot explain myself....
never been so shocked and awed by a fictional story......
few potions of interest that keep revolving in my empty head:
1. from scene VI "Every morning, he would wake up, light his Marlboro light and water the cactus." water the cactus. very interesting. lot of nostalgic effervescences.
2. from scece VII this one is simply the best "I'm coming to collect my lost soul. Pick me up at the airport. Find my itinerary attached with this mail…." (O: simply the best insight to the taal called "RARA" or is it the "NOODLE" he he he (O:
3. scene III is where i can find a lot of connections .
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keep writing amber
(O: