I don't see any wrong as the starter has already said its an attemp!

People who have grabbed citizenship of the country by many means still could not come out of "Pizzeria" and "Saf safai" job, a guy who probably is a student has attempted to do something different!! it was not a real project I think was just a trial, so not bad. I always appreciate any Nepalese abroad who want to do "something"  "professional"....there are a lot of opportunities in Germany. "Don't be sad or sentimental!"

pkrbest bhai, you can include folk style instead of Nepali rap or sentimental/slow song (which has no rating here where there are a lot of such stuffs) if you want to visualise and also grab interest of the people. Don't forget single line from Aani can attract so much attention, yours also can......