FF, good to see ya.  You call a lion an elf?  BTW, great work on your take on my poem and penning down your original verse in the same A-B-A-B format.  Great seeing you here.

Sahayog, the smartest 21 year ol kid in sajha, you're here too?  Always a pleasure running across you in sajha, SB and FB.  And yeah, I do write poems every now and then when I get bored with nothing much going around...An idle mind they say is the devils' wo.....

Jashmine, thanks for the dropping by and leaving a few words here.  Yeah, the story I'd posted a few months ago had its last part remaining but due to reasons I felt was strongly descriptive in nature, it wouldn't have been appropriate for the environment in sajha (especially since it was a true story and the people involved were REAL characters).  Two months ago, I'd taken out the first 2 parts to the story and also any remaining morsel mentioning names outta the forum for good.  I regret that you were kept waiting for so long.  Here's a smile to cheer you up

Superhero, nice nick!  As long as you don't wear your undies outside your pants, alls cool!   I'm glad that you loved the poem and I hope that I shall be able to meet up to your level of expectations every time I post up another poem here (when the mood to create such pieces comes about)...Pray that the markets get real bad again so I could pen down something when I'm sitting on my desk doing nothing...Defn not good for me, but atleast it'd be akin to providing community service to the folks here.  Also, thanks a gazillion for the comment, my dear friend.

Elusivecat, you should post your weak rhymes on this forum too so I could leave a few comments on it myself.  BTW, thanks for the support.  However, this still does not mean I support your Maoist supporting views, my commie comrade.