.Rythm,

So the wait is over. I knew we had to wait a little bit to read your story but didn't have clue that we had to wait till your summer vacation. Well, the wait was worth it and you came up with a very nice story. Derr aaya par Durust aaya! he he he!! Simple story yet very captivative. I liked the names you have chosen for your characters and specially the way you write "Aama" and "Buwa" in your stories. In such a small story you have successfully described the different stages of one's life and have ended at a very good stage of her life, where she can have a good hope for better future.

"She went to school two days a week and worked six days a week. She joked that she now had an eight-day week." A typical life of international students... very realistic.

Kudos! :-)