Do not remember me,

Sorry I will keep remembering you. I hope I will be able to produce something that you love. Of course I need lots of encouragement and shed light on the weaknesses.

Birkhe,

Dhayabad. yo lakhai bhanne pani ajib hundo rahecha. Chitta nabujhne jatti gare pani. Krama jari cha......

miss_me,

good going. I would suggest to write little shorter ones. Try to read some representative ghazals and analyze the usage of kafia and radif. Kafia is the heart of a ghazal and you do not want any "---pathies" in the cardiac structure. ( You need some corrective interventions). More later.