miss_me,

If I do (imperfectly) you can do too. Keep trying.

aman,

You should seriously think of developing them into ghazals (like Nepe said)  (We will help you !! Promise )

Rejinashah

Though your ID sounds like a female, I presume you are a guy.

You need to edit, edit and edit your work. Keep going.

Nepe,

I am lucky to have you as a "positive critic" - which motivates me to keep going.

Your suggestions and comments on my "lakh sher" are of "karod" . I will keep trying.

I was expecting comment on the usage of rather colloquial language on that particular sher - (nepali influenced by hindi as spoken in the terai belt as well as in remote hilly regions).