Nepe

I read your ghazal again - nice use of "hunu" with the meanings of "be" and "are"
 

प्रस्ताब छ मान्छौ भने, सिर्फ आधा हुने
दृष्यमा म कृष्ण हुन्जेल, तिमी राधा हुनु !