@amber
thank you so much for reading.

@the bony loote
I was a little reluctant in posting this one. Consider me a novice trying to sneak into the guild of excellent writers here in sajha. I really appreciate you reading this. As far as the making characters talk in Nepali is concerned honestly I am motivated by the veterans here. You have practiced the format too, haven't you? I absolutely liked your versions. No offense, I attempted to reach out to the people who could connect to it and yes I am taking your advice. I should reach out to the multitude. Next time I write it will be intelligible. I don't know how long will it take but I will.
By the way if I re-post with the substituted meaningful roman scripts will you ask Josephine to read hehe. Don't  scowl at me!!

Thank you very much for sprinkling. 'Aayo Nuun' could have connected well . Okay then I am leaving with a deficiency but will be back after proper medication.

pat pat loote thou critique  I shall amend.