this story certainly deserves more visibility. i found the doom and despair of the reality of Nepal in it. the swift narration has made it all the more painstakingly beautiful. kudos to you occult ( and this is just your first story (?))

one thought that sprouted in my mind while reading your story occult and please take it with a pinch of salt:
i know it gives more realistic feel by making them characters talk in nepali but somehow i find it uncomfortable reading long conversations in nepali (in roman scripts) in stories written in english. what if i want my friend joseph to read this story and know about the my country's status quo? :P just a thought that you might want to consider in your future attempts :)