"darjeelingay jokes and some of the famous momo jokes .”  hmmm...

my shout out for the writer! story telling comes naturally and effortlessly to this writer. truly spontaneous, yes it is. once again, i loved the narration... very very engaging!!!
now, the reader in me wants you to reason, reason about these unresolved characters in your story. nature, genes, circumstances or brought up, what shaped up their psyche? what made this certain race psyched out? i wanna see philosophical side of samsara now. besides, readers would  definitely love to see your characters behind their tough exteriors, a softer subtle side of them. it exists, hoina? Or this particular reader is too demanding?
Occhey for sharing.