Posted by: gunyucholi March 11, 2008
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Emotions are like silhouettes, featureless but with strong outlines. You expressed  it all so rationally in this story.Beautiful touch up at the end. You wrapped it up so neatly.That is why I said 'writer of your caliber' without counting the number of your stories.Count matters or the quality of the content ?
I think  these beautiful lines in Urdu sum up your story. Good luck.
"वो अफ्सना जिसे अन्जाम तक लाना न हो मुम्किन
उसे एक खुब्सूरत मोड देकर छोड्ना अच्छा"




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