Poetry is very good as usual, no doubts on that and hats off to you.
But, don't feel so alone. Be optimistic.
" Kishi roj unse mulakat hogi,
Tumhari jaan usdin, tumhare saath hogi."
 and one huge question!! Why did u said that "yo kabita malai sunya jasto lagyo" ? (mero arko thread ma)... Kaha sunya jasto lagyo?????