Dipika....thats an excellent piece of writing.......i liked it very much....the issue about...either Antagonist liked it or not does not judge ur excellency of the message u r trying to convey....i find myself in the story in some part of my life....yo sansar ma sabai lai sabai kura man parne bhaye kina HATRED  bhanne jantu ko janma hunthyo....kina Nathuram Godse le Mahatma Gandhi lai Goli hanthyooo......Keep up the Good Work.