Posted by: Nepal Premi December 21, 2007
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Dipika ji, Yes again, the most interesting part I liked is the true reality of your story. There are many people living as like your life and you expressed the feelings of all those in a better way. Developing your sentences more beautifully in the body part would add more attraction to the readers. Still, felt very good. Keep it up!