ठुली,

मान्छे जस्तै कुकुर पनि थरि थरि को हुने रैछ। लघुकथा पढिदेको मा धन्यबाद।

Dipika,

मलाइ यो लघुकथा लेख्न प्रेरित गर्ने तपाइ को "फुर्के" अनि "जम्बो" नै हुन। हुन त यो मेरो नेपालीमा कथा (लघुकथा) लेख्ने पहिलो प्रयास हो। मलाइ थाह छ, राम्रो त पक्कै पनि छैन। प्रेरणादायक प्रतिक्रिया को लागि मुरि मुरि धन्यबाद।

Kancha01,

पढेर प्रतिक्रिया दिनु भएकोमा धन्यबाद।

ktmreality,

I really appreciate your honest comments. As I have mentioned before, this is my first attempt to write a nepali story. I know there are many weaknesses in it. I will try to come up with a better substance in the next piece. Thank you very much for reading and coming up with some constructive comments.

Pjna007,

Thanks for reading. I read your story in another thread and bet your story was not less painful than mine if not more.