Sum Off,

Juxtaposing events to keep the audience speculating, is brilliant. You unveiled Sunil as he would in a real life. Sunil is such a complex character. I expect this character gets some sympathy on first interaction with anyone. When they get to know more, people find him distasteful. It took a long time even for his mom to know him well. You succeed on giving that impression. 

I like the way you describe the game of Glass Marbles. Someone who had never heard about it would know how Sunil cheated on the game.

As always you have left your signatures here and there in the story with those witty, strong and philosophical quotes.

Staying hungry for more of you…

-SunnyDev