kevin ji,
jati dhanyabaad diye ni pugdaina tapailai. i read it all. i havent read any book for a long long time and you reminded me that i should read some sometime.
your writing skill was excellent. bises gari, i liked the sabda chayan. you have chosen really good words at appropriate situations. maile dherai jaso nepali book ma dekhne bhanda bhinna kisimka sabda pani bhete yaha.
feri feri aru prastuti pani aaune chhan bhanne aasha chha.
shubhakamana.