म रातभरि तल आफ्नो जवानीसङ एक्लै सङर्श गर्दै बस्थे अनि ६ तल्लामा त्यो युबती एक्लै सुतिरहेकि हुन्थी। म घरि घरि आफ्नो सुगठित शरीरलाइ ऐनामा हेर्थें र कल्पिन्थे उसलाइ .....

के यो बाक्यले narrater पुरुस भएको कुरा पुस्टि गर्दैन र?

CL sweetie...howdie...how u been ??

Timro khoji maa ma faat sabai ghumey

tarai sabai faadey

pahad chadey, orley

arko pahad chadey ani orley

ahiley pheri arko chad dai chu :P hehehe

jpt jpt :P

:D

on the serious note...

having a well built body makes someone a man :O...u mean purush :O...never knew that :P...i thought it was other distinguishing characters to differentiate between purush and stri :D...may be I learned wrong...mero master laai gayera pheri sikaa bhannu paryo :D...kaliyug ko master sarai kharab, kamai nalagney mora haru...oops i mean mori haru...(they were not well built, so i guess they were females then...hai hai hai :P)

Not a bad story...but girl seriously i din feel it...felt like artificial extension to the story...jabarjasti badhaako jasto...i've read ur stories before...this din have the same appeal...U can do a lot better than the way u've expressed the narrator...