Amber - Good going. The bold tone of the narration made it all the more interesting. I liked how you were unafraid to write about female sexuality and the somewhat sticky issue of sex with cousins (if I understood the relationship between Keshya and Awani correctly). I am sure you have already rasied quite a few eyebrows and I can only say it takes a certain amount of talent to knit a thorny subject like that into a story. Best wishes. CH