Posted by: shirish August 31, 2007
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Thank You for suggestions and appreciation.
Poon Hill
Check out the ghazal link. You will see a process there
http://www.sajha.com/sajha/html/OpenThread.cfm?forum=4&ThreadID=25330
Nepali Kanchi
Thank You..मन पराई दिनु भएकोमा !
Dhami Jhankri
thank You
miss me
Literature is always exaggerated. So is this poem.
Recently, I have tried to be positive with my writings. Thank You for your appreciation.
Mr truth
I never tried to write somthing for the children. Your advice will definitely be considered. This is what I was doing late that night.
Sangfroid
Rumal instead of tissue is definitely an option. TY but I did not find alternative for "Life Saver". Let me correct the text and make it simpler and send to some publications targetted for children. Good idea.
SurNaTal
Your writings are better than mine. I think the comparisions in this one made little different. This attempt was only modification from the original work of Ms McDonnell (which is definitely praiseworthy.)
Poon Hill
Check out the ghazal link. You will see a process there
http://www.sajha.com/sajha/html/OpenThread.cfm?forum=4&ThreadID=25330
Nepali Kanchi
Thank You..मन पराई दिनु भएकोमा !
Dhami Jhankri
thank You
miss me
Literature is always exaggerated. So is this poem.
Recently, I have tried to be positive with my writings. Thank You for your appreciation.
Mr truth
I never tried to write somthing for the children. Your advice will definitely be considered. This is what I was doing late that night.
Sangfroid
Rumal instead of tissue is definitely an option. TY but I did not find alternative for "Life Saver". Let me correct the text and make it simpler and send to some publications targetted for children. Good idea.
SurNaTal
Your writings are better than mine. I think the comparisions in this one made little different. This attempt was only modification from the original work of Ms McDonnell (which is definitely praiseworthy.)
Last edited: 31-Aug-07 03:34 PM