“The route to a woman's heart is circuitous, I believe, and unlike the detours in a road under repair, it is not marked clearly. Well yes, the men do know how to hold a bag, hold a door, and generally treat a woman like the queen she is but still if you don’t make the right turn, you are off the list”. exactly. that's why i don't speed up these days ...defensive driving you see? hahahahahaha :D..i have 2 tickets already in my name :(..yeah for over-speeding :D :P amber...presentation is great..language/word-selection is impeccable for the most part, but u missed out this time on plot. i am a kind of a reader who believes in smashing plots :P... while i understand darpana's plight, you could have brought some more feel about her feelings in the story to make readers cry along with her. there's no point stating that a character is crying in the story if u can't make readers feel what she is feeling...you need to bring moments (i frankly don't know how though :P) to make readers feel the feelings of characters. :D