Posted by: SITARA August 3, 2007
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August, I was a bit confused about the relationship between HIM, Meena and Ramesh. However, your last line "…………..She kept speaking but He cant hear a thing any further...He felt as if a jumbo jet flew right next to his ears……… " was a very original metaphor and a great ending to your story.
Keep writing!