No, No Samsara, I am not crticizing the writer. He has done good job in his writing. I liked that one. If I didn't like the story, I would have never read it complete or commented on it. I was trying to convey my thought if we keep portraying fake scary part in stories, it will harm the real victim of heinous atrocity. I even didn't say anything against this story. The story is believable, as you said because similar cases are there everywhere in town. But this is an untrue reporting with a date stamp, which may diminish a lot of real stories much or less cruel than this story, just like the Madi incident or Mukti sir or forced donations or any other you want to pick up. I was just expressing how it impacted my feeling. If you scare somebody, and in response he says "Uff I am scared, better not to scare me this way" then do you count that kind of response as a negative comment? That's just a natural comment yaar. It's good we got his good piece of work to read but in future, if he keeps scaring his readers with a fake story, that ain't gonna help him. If I were in his position, such a comment would be considered as a critical but positive one, but see how he came to respond with his trademark words like Comrade and मलद्वार. That's something I felt I need to respond. Be clear, I never hate a person while exchanging opinions. Being a simple nepalese (by character), I just find hard to control myself to fire back if one misunderstands me, however, I will try not to answer further.