Posted by: toot August 2, 2007
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Bhaley,
great great story man!
u almost got me! actually, u got me bro! i, like the others was thinking that this was real and was about to explode with anger towards comrade chana! chana is a nice name for a comrade though.
the dates you chose were all at random right? coz july 14th, the day u landed in ktm was my b'day! i was thinkin to myself my lucky day has turned out to be so unlucky for bhaley!
anyways, great writing. dont worry about the typos n grammatical errors. i dont care, as long as i can understand what you're trying to say.
waiting for another one of your stories...toot