RATOBHALEY, First of all, Thanks for sharing. Considering that you wrote the story in Sajha itself in ONE FLOW, the language used and the edition is pretty good suggesting that you are a natural. There was a couple of things in the storyline that i enjoyed. For the major length of your work, I thought that you were writing out a real life experience but once you used the word GUN, it surprised me and immediately I knew that it was FICTION. The ending was SUDDEN but well etched out. LOL...see more dreams, so that you can treat us with more stories like this..........