you write beautifully.......waiting to read more.......please keep on writing. one observation i would like to make though is that.....maybe u should come to the point a bit sooner......this kind of prolonged background (or is it foreground) is more suited to a novel, not a story. That is just my opinion. You have brought a very refreshing style to sajha. You have command over the big words that you use so that they dont seem out of place. Please keep on writing