Posted by: bodmas May 24, 2007
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Amber to be frank, I didn't like how you ended the story. This is only a personal opinion, your writing is good and the matter you brought is also good the first part was awesome, but the second part it seems you wrote in haste or something, I hope u will take it positively. And pls pls do keep writing. We need writers like yourself.