Nice penmanship. I like the way you portrayed characters in this piece. The 8 year-old sweetie pie is the highlight of them. I would kiss her and make her my little sis anyday. Haven't read a lot of stories on relationships and family values, especially in Sajha. This one surely stands out right there somewhere in front. Good job! Gunyucholi, Where on earth has Amber mentioned that's it a short story? Please spare this thread from your yawns. There are plenty of other threads where your yawns may carry some gravity, not here. Thanks!