You are a brilliant writer Sum Off. I guess you had to meet the deadline and perhaps had a rush to finish the story off. But you did ever so well again. Your story was like, say a four year journey in the sea, and I set off along with your characters. There were thunders, there were storms and tides in the pitch darkness of the sea. Ofcourse some bright daylight did appear at times but they were very short-lived. Amidst the highs and the lows you sailed smoothly until Dhaney was caught in the middle of a big big trouble- an impending catastrophe. You knew you couldn't do anything alone, for the decisive characters were aloof of Dhaney's wellbeing. They were safely tucked inside the comforts of the ship. Your mercy would save Dhaney in no ways, so you gave up.That was Dhaney's destiny! Dhaney was Dhaney afterall. So end of one Dhaney's story here and the beginning of the other's.But the beauty of your writing lies in here. You created the thunders, you created the storms, you created the brightness and darkness, you created the start and the end of the journey for Dhaney (though he may still be alive somewhere in the rough sea or distant shores), and you created the start of the journey for another Dhaney- the Gulmi boy. You created the hope for one, destroyed it and again created one for another- and you left it there foretelling us that another typical Dhaney story was in the making. And all of us are compelled to accept you. Utterly helpless us! OK enough of my gan-gan. It was a joy to read your story. Decorate your words, furnish, garnish, illuminate and jazz them up more. Rest assured, you are one of the finest Nepali story-tellers of all time.