Paradise, I am concerned about your second advice because it can be educational to me. I feel little uncomfortable about it, though. I have to confess that I read so little that I don't even qualify as a reader. However I usually venture as a literary critic. I think only narration he has done is to picture events and expressions on the characters. Could you please quote any instance where the narrator is judgemental. "When his ambitions became his addictions, needs became his virtues. He became so materialistic that he would buy stuffs and then learn their uses." Sentences like these are impossible through characters. There is no such character who can speak these words. Maybe, it's his simple and beautiful opinion that entice me to read his story.